Monday, May 17, 2010

Poem Revision #2: Beneath the Canapy


Remember when you said it was a forest during rainfall?
I was there:
The liquid crystals streaming down my face,
Drowning the remnants of a mask.
The trees:
Intertwining giants encircling me,
Locking me within a twilight catacomb of fear.
Do you remember?
Thunder:
Erupting in the distance,
Stretching over the miles that divided us,
Connecting us.
Blazing bolts of lightning:
Illuminating my Hell,
Sent your image elevating to the skys,
Streaking your eyes across the heavens.
It was ecstasy,
Until lightning passed,
Sending darkness to return in a bout of furry,
Losing you.
I remember.
Do you?

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